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Feels like I'm flying
Though my feet's on the ground
Space has filled the holes left behind
By the chipped off pieces of my mind
I can feel my feeling dull
As another piece of me
Floats away into the stars
Never to be retrieved
Though my feet's on the ground
Space has filled the holes left behind
By the chipped off pieces of my mind
I can feel my feeling dull
As another piece of me
Floats away into the stars
Never to be retrieved
Literature
My Dear, Please...
You're tired right now.
I can tell from your eyes;
You simply wish to sleep and never wake
You need a relief from this life,
You need to find your own little space.
But my dear I beg you,
don't vanish without a trace...
Literature
I care
i.
your words drip with crimson
as you bite your lip;
you always liked to pretend
you held the strength of metal,
and now all that’s left is the aftertaste of copper
trickling down your throat-
what happened to the child throwing pennies in the fountain?
ii.
hidden under the threaded sleeves of your sweater,
I can picture your hands shaking like earthquakes
and your fists held clenched;
I worry your fingernails cut dashed lines
into the palms of your hands,
like the ones painted on back roads and highways-
I’m worried where you plan on going
iii.
viewing your puffy eyes and hearing woebegone-winded words
tangle on your tra
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speak up before it's too late
it saddens me deeply
how the difference
between making your life
and taking your life
is a single letter
remember the importance
of words-
speak up before it's too late
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Me and AmoreSyLv worked together to tell about losing yourself. She put a whole interpretation in the description of her painting and it's awesome and makes my poem seem so deep so I'll let her tell you more.
Me and AmoreSyLv worked together to tell about losing yourself. She put a whole interpretation in the description of her painting and it's awesome and makes my poem seem so deep so I'll let her tell you more.
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This piece works really well with the picture ^_^. I reread it after reading your partners interpretation and I think you guys did extremely well together. Thanks for joining this competition with all of us. It's been super fun ^_^.